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5 May 2006
Hello, All
Hello everyone!
Is it possible to rip out the Russian text from Star Heritage and replace it with
English. If possible, how? I myself strongly doubted this, but recently
came across a translation of one of the Russian Dizzy... How did they do it without having
sources?
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Vyacheslav Kalinin
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5 May 2006
Hello, ant222
ant> Is it possible to tear out Russian text from Star Heritage and replace it
ant> it into English. If possible, how? I'm very much into this myself
ant> I doubted it, but recently I came across a translation of one of the Russian
ant> Dizzy... How did they do this without having the source code?
What's the point?
You will also have to adapt it to TAP, which is hardly realistic.
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Demon Adramelek
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5 May 2006
Hello new art
Why in TAR? Our foreign comrades also have disk interfaces. Here, take a look
for examples of translations:
http://tcg.speccy.cz/index.php?pg=games-e
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goodboy
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5 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
the game itself can be translated into TAP; when loading a block, the procedure requires it
number by which a track/sector is selected from the table
The demo version is easier to translate, the font is all RUS/LAT, you can edit the text
gradually, in the original only Russian.
about ten years ago I started translating, but everything stalled and problems began
let’s say from the translation of the verse after the picture, then it still had to be redone
procedure for entering the code. Some of the texts remain, if necessary I can look for it.
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Demon Adramelek
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5 May 2006
Hello new art
new> So be it.
new> But the initiative must be on their part.
new> Play then.
So, comrade ant222 on the WoS forum publicly expressed himself in the spirit that he was ready
make a translation if anyone takes the text out of ZH. Why don't you like this initiative?
Are you satisfied? :) I would even help him - if I were a hacker or a translator. Well
If not, I’m ready to offer my candidacy for the position of beta tester.
The main thing is translation, and they will translate it into their own formats, not small ones.
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5 May 2006
Hello, ant222
ant> How did they do this without the source code?
uh, how did we do it before? so they did.
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Vyacheslav Kalinin
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5 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
Adr> Why in TAR? Our foreign comrades also have disk interfaces.
Adr> Here, look at examples of translations:
So be it.
But the initiative must also be on their part.
Play for them.
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Vyacheslav Kalinin
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6 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
Adr> Why are you not satisfied with this initiative?
Because he is not a bourgeois. =)
It’s certainly a good idea, it’s strange that no one has done this before.
Although in my opinion it is better to spend energy on the second part of the game.
Even if it’s a third the size of the first one.
From
Demon Adramelek
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6 May 2006
Hello GNTB
This is all, of course, understandable, but no one here was going to Kafka and Platonov
translate. I hope everyone understands that for 0 rubles 0 kopecks professional
It is impossible to find a translator. The only way out I see is to find
person whose native language is English, and ask him to be
editor. Let him “literaturize” the text, and even without preserving it
verbatim, it will be quite normal for foreign comrades to read it. Damn
take, after all, Dante was also not translated word for word, just like Goethe. What
will you do it here?
P.S. But for the sake of curiosity, create a thread on WoS that you translate into
English the best Russian adventure and you need an editor - what do you think?
How many people will respond?
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Demon Adramelek
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6 May 2006
Hello new art
new> Because he is not a bourgeois. =)
Well, it’s clear that it’s much easier to find a local with knowledge of English than
an Englishman with knowledge of Russian.
In general, translation is not such a big problem. There are great professional
(so to speak) teams of amateur translators, to whom you can
contact. The same "Masterpiece", for example, and also a bunch of people translating manga from
English into Russian (the largest team was at mangaproject.ru, but he,
apparently he rested in God; people, of course, haven’t gone anywhere, but catching them
will have to do it one by one). And among the interested spektrumists there are probably
people with knowledge of literary English. The choice is large, in general, and someone
will probably agree.
new> The idea is certainly a good one, it’s strange that no one has done this before.
Likewise. The program is worthy of being included in the Speccy gold fund.
Actually, it has already entered, but so far only in the CIS. And I would like - in
all over the world. After all, why not? Let them know that they haven't gotten drunk yet
Russian heroes.
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6 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
Adr> In general, translation is not such a big problem. There are big
Adr> professional (so to speak) teams
Adr> amateur translators you can turn to. The same "Masterpiece"
Adr> for example, and also a bunch of people translating manga from English to
Adr> Russian (the largest team was on mangaproject.ru, but he,
Adr> apparently rested in God; people, of course, haven’t gone anywhere, but catch
Adr> they will have to be one at a time). And among interested spektrumists
Adr> there are probably people with knowledge of literary English. Choice
Adr> is big, in general, and someone will probably agree.
Hmmm......
Translation from English into Russian, and from Russian into English, not always
turn out equally well. Somehow I didn’t construct the phrase very well, but you
Of course you get the point. People who have lived abroad are usually able to translate more easily
from Russian to English. We, better from English into Russian.
For example, for the last year, every week I have to translate something into
Russian. But translating from Russian, in my understanding, is much more difficult and
more dreary. Because when translating into our language, you think about how we speak.When translating into English, you need to think how they speak.
I know what I'm talking about, believe me.
We won’t go far for an example:
goo> about ten years ago I started translating, but everything died out, they started
goo> let's say there were problems with translating the verse after the picture, then there was more to do
goo> redo the code entry procedure.
Here is an example of translation difficulties.
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6 May 2006
Hello, ant222
It seems the game was ported to GB, I doubt it’s in Russian.
and here is an example of my work ten years ago,
I'm unlikely to find trd
landing was hard: rescue
the boat crashed into a steep cliff and
split. wrapped in cushioning
cocoon I rolled down the slope and landed
in thickets of thorny bushes.
Landing was rigid; the; life boat run
into a steep slope of a rock and has
broken up. I wrapped up in an
amortization cocoon slide on a slope and
landed in thrickets of a prickly bush.
I lay motionless for several minutes. That’s it.
my body ached. it was hard to breathe. with difficulty
having freed myself from the cocoon, I climbed up
legs. I felt sick and shaky, but no matter how
strangely, the arms and legs were intact.
Some minutes I laid motionlessly.All my
body whined. It was hard to breathe.
Hardly released from a cocoon I got up.
Me stirred up and swayed, but strangely
enough, hands and legs were whole.
I looked around. from the west and south half
the sky was covered with sheer gray-green
swamps stretched across the cliffs to the east.
a light wind carried unpleasant
smells of rotten water. in the north, near
the very horizon, I saw a strip
forests
I looked round. From the West and the
South the half of sky closed steep gray -
green rocks In the east reached bogs.
The breeze informed up to me unpleasantsmells of rotten water. In the north, at
the horizon, I made out a strip of a
wood.
I lay there for a few more hours
a huge flat boulder, heated
local sun .strength gradually
were returning. I watched how it was hiding
there was light behind the rocks and I didn’t think about anything.
Even some hours I have slept on the huge
flat boulder which has been heated up by
the local sun. Forces gradually came
back. I looked, how the sun was hidden
behind rocks and there was nothing think
about.
I didn't notice how dark it got. in the sky
the first stars poured out. it got cold and
I wrapped myself tightly in the remains of my
shock-absorbing cocoon. somewhere loud
shouted the night bird and its echo
a scream echoed over the rocks.
I did not notice that have darkened.The
first stars appeared in the sky. It
became cold and I has densely muffled in
the rests of the depreciation cocoon.
Somewhere was loudly cried out by a night
bird and a booming echo of its shout
swept above rocks.
the night flew by unnoticed. in the east
a huge crimson disk rose
local luminary. by morning I'm finally
frozen very close, right next to my ear
, some predator growled. turn around
I didn't have time anymore...
Night has flown by imperceptibly. In the
east a huge rose crimson disk of the
local sun. In the morning I finallyfrozen. Absolutely beside, directly at
my ear, somewhat beast growled. I have
not any time to turn
I made my way through the bush to the north.
hard and prickly branches clung to my feet
and slapped him in the face. but then I no longer
paid attention to this. I was in a hurry
get to the nearby forest.
I made the way through a bush on the
North. Rigid and prickly branches
clinged to my legs and whipped on my
face. I did not pay attention to it.
I hurried up to reach up to nearly wood.
the forest greeted me with a rustle
leaves, bird voices and animal cries.
I didn't even have time to walk a few meters
jumped on me from somewhere above
a huge black cat and grabbed it with its claws
in the neck.
The wood met me with a rustle of
leaves, voices of birds and shouts of
animals. I did not any meters when from
somewhere above a huge black cat has
jumped on me and seized his claws in my
neck
my opponent let out a death cry and
fell on his side. only now I could
look at it carefully. it was
A panther of incredible size. black
fur covered her strong muscular body
body. I couldn't believe that
won this difficult battle.
My opponent issued agonal shout and was
tumbled down sideways. And now I could
examine it closely. It was the pantherof the improbable sizes. The black hair
covered its strong browny body. I could
don't believe that have won this hard
fight.
the corpse of the panther - the corpse of the panther
nothing special - Anything interesting
Several hours have passed. I was resting and nothing
I didn't think so. some hours has past. I
had a rest without any think.
I had to walk very carefully at night.
suddenly I fell into a deep hole, until
edges filled with stinking water.
cold waves closed over my
head.
It was necessary to go very cautiously at
night. Suddenly I failed in a deep
hole,filled with smelly water up to
edges. Cold waves closed above my head.
after some time on all channels
connections of the central union of human
The following message was sent to the colonies
: military meeting of the central alliance with
with deep regret reports that when
died on an important mission
brave secret agent military
the meeting 'undaunted' about this became
known after the agent did not leave
to be contacted at the appointed time. president
and guidance bring deep
Condolences to the family and friends of the deceased
.
After a while on all local channels of
the central union of human colonies the
following message has been transferred;
The; military meeting of the central union
with a deep regret informs, that duringof the important task the confidential
agent of military meeting 'fearless' has
fallen death brave It has known after the
agent has not established connections in
due time. The president and the
management bring the condolences to
relatives and close friends of this hero.
the swamp to which I headed
extended far to the east. north
in a foggy haze all the way to the horizon
the muddy waters of the dying spread out
lakes. there was nothing to think about crossing
him. in the south the ridge still stretched
steep cliffs.
the God to which I was directed reached
far the east. To the north in foggy
smoke up to the horizon muddy waters of
dying lake were spread. There was
nothing to think to cross it. In the
south lasted the ridge of steep rocks.
From
goodboy
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6 May 2006
Hello, ant222
I'm afraid that I'll only have enough patience to remake the demo version, and as for the lyrics, they
and so it is in the game, another thing is that there are different options for events. from English
the text only needs a length less or as in the original, and formatting
According to the number of characters in a line, it is possible to hyphenate. if anyone is interested
send a translation for the first location.
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Anton Shepelev
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6 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
Yep. There are many errors associated with the literal translation of Russian sentences and
phrases, as well as
with the fact that in Russian you can publish both a cry and a newspaper, but in English they are different
there will be words. So, in my opinion, there is some confusion here and there with the times.
What I liked most:
In general, I thought my English was the worst... I think I can translate
It’s better if you send all the Russian texts, and those translated into English
put it in the game.
From
Anton Shepelev
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6 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
> And among the interested spektrumists there are probably people with
> knowledge of literary English. The choice is large, in general, and someone
> will probably agree.
But for ten years the translation was never made...
Is there really no one on the entire forum who can solve technical problems?
Well, let's ask native speakers to edit...
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Anton Shepelev
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7 May 2006
Hello, ant222
Вот, быстренько перевел несколько абзацев. Черновой вариант. Уверен, что тоже
есть ошибки, но намного меньше.
┌─- code ───
It's been a hard landing. The life-boat
ran into a vertical mounaintside and
splitted. Muffled up in a shock cocoon, I
rolled down the slope into spiny bushes.
I lay motionless for a few minutes. All
my body ached. It was difficult to
breath. Having hardly doffed the cocoon,
I got on my feet. I felt giddy, but,
strangly enough, my arms and legs were
intact.
I looked around. Plumb greyish green
rocks obstructed half the sky to the
north-west and south. Swamps stretched
to the east. Far to the north loomed the
line of a forest.
[look at boat]
In the life-boat I found a microbattery
connected to the board computer.
[look at cocoon]
Nothing important...
[look at battery]
"ARTANG THE GREAT. Universal charger".
[look at comp]
Seems, it still works.
[use comp]
I touched the sensors. "Ready" - replied
the computer in Artangian.
[talk to comp]
1. Where am I?
2. Board sysrtem diagnostics
3. Take the bearings of local radio-
signal sources
4. First aid
[1]
The planet system was not found in the
database.
[2]
Fatal malfunctions in the life-support
system found.
[3]
An undentified radio source detected in
the east.
[4]
Something clicked on the cmputer's
panel, opened two folds, revealing alittle chamber built into the panel.
There lay an ampul inside.
└── code ───
If there are no serious complaints, I will continue in the same spirit.
But get the texts anyway. Each location is completely exploreable and crazy
you'll get off.
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Anton Shepelev
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7 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
The total volume of text, or the volume for a given location, or for a given
screen (paragraph)?
I will, of course, translate the first location, but to translate everything else, I have to
You will have to carefully go through the entire game, checking all situations everywhere. Still
It is advisable to have the texts torn out. So I will translate everything much faster.
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8 May 2006
Hello, ant222
When I couldn’t guess the terminal code to open a niche in the rock, through a shadow network
climbed in and looked at what the “text” was there.
By “text” in ZH we mean a script stuffed with commands, where embedded and
descriptions of locations, and menus, and options for selecting items, and setting bits and bytes in
Depending on the events, there may also be commands for displaying pictures and changing music...
In short, in order to compose a script correctly and correctly, you must, among other things,
know its commands (the command there is a special byte, which can be followed by
parameters). It’s possible and simpler - to fit phrases in English into their Russian original
(GO - GO, USE - USE, etc.), but then in some places we get a broken translation
descriptions of locations.
From
Anton Shepelev
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8 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
> eng. translation should be no longer than Russian
> The English text should be less than or equal in volume to Russian - a
> what other restrictions may there be?
No, you have already said this. I'm asking if this limitation is imposed on the length
what: one “screen” of text or a description of one situation (sometimes it takes
several screens (4-5 lines each), scrolling along
)?
As I guess, one elementary description is meant: output after
performing one action: take, examine, go, which is sometimes in the game
sometimes it takes more than 4-5 lines and is displayed in parts. For example, instructions for
game or the very first text, although there may be one of text...
Yes, it's probably just one . So?
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Anton Shepelev
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8 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
1. To my shame, I don’t know what SP10 is.
2. I look forward to sending you all texts from the game by e-mail. I myself have no idea
how to rip them out.
From
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8 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
> yeah, I found it
I am a text editor in this gbc file only a small piece of intelligible text
I found Ch and it was a mishmash of different locations, in my opinion. Maybe Shtyrlitz or
what else to try? Are you sure you found normal text there?
> by the way, he can find out Matveev’s opinion about our idea, after all
> author of the idea and texts ?
>
> the first headache is what to do with level reductions???
> Health, Strength, Endurance, Experience, Level ???
This, of course, would be necessary. I'm just afraid to ask. What if he won't allow it? On the other hand
On the other hand, the new ZH for PC was released in English, but Spectrum's should
be already abandonware.
What to do with abbreviations? Abbreviate in English...
I still don’t understand, what are the restrictions on the volume of texts?
From
Demon Adramelek
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8 May 2006
Hello, ant222
ant> I am a text editor in this gbc file, only a small piece
ant> I found a clear text and it was a mishmash of different locations, according to
ant> to mine. Maybe try Shtyrlitz or something else? You're definitely there
ant> did you find the normal text?
When I looked for the first time, I thought I had found it. Later I realized that there
still not plain text.
ant> I still don’t understand, what are the restrictions on the volume of texts?
The English text should be less or equal in volume to Russian - and what else
could there be restrictions?
From
Demon Adramelek
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8 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
goo> it seems the game was ported to GB, I doubt it’s in Russian.
By the way, yes. Here is their website: http://www.r-lab.8m.com/proj.htm Only a link to the game
hasn't worked for a long time.
Later: yeah, I finally found it:
http://www.rom-world.com/search/index.php?s=100&q=star%20castle&sort=system_asc
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goodboy
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8 May 2006
Hello, Adramelek
By the way, he can find out Matveev’s opinion about our idea, after all, he is the author of the idea and
texts?
The first headache is what to do with the reductions in levels???
Health, Strength, Endurance, Experience, Level???
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8 May 2006
Hello, SAM style
SAM> It is possible and simpler - to fit phrases in English into their Russian original
SAM> (GO - GO, USE - USE, etc.), but then in some places we get
SAM> short translation of location descriptions.
English in most cases the text is shorter, but with the title
items may have problems.
to ant222; let's move on; by mail.
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8 May 2006
Hello, ant222
ant> Yes, it's probably just one . So?
yes
you need to fit into the part of the text visible on the screen
and one more thing if we do it - DEMO version from
SP10, it works - let’s fasten the rest of the parts
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goodboy
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8 May 2006
Hello, ant222
enl. the translation should be no longer than Russian, although if I figure out the format
It will be easier to edit locations, before I changed everything in a hex editor to
amiga.
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Anton Shepelev
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8 May 2006
Hello, goodboy
I looked at the gameboy port and was disappointed: all the graphics were completely redone,
or simply put, it’s spoiled. The music also has nothing original
general. Nothing there resembles the atmosphere of ZH.
What is most interesting is that the translation cannot be said to be professional, although
the first location is in some places very similar to mine. I think you can't write painted in gray and green> to say that the rocks were grey-green...